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Leone by otakuking69 Leone by otakuking69
i messed up leone's left eye. the pencil guidelines never erase so that why there is some pencl lines in the skin. for the scarf, i tried belnding the brown i had with black to try to make it darker
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Emelina0 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG IT'S HER!! I've seen this anime!! It's soo good! >:3 Great work! Your art style is amazing! And I don't see anything wrong with the eyes! >:C
I totally agree with you! It gets really annoying when you can't erase the sketch and then you end up seeing it after you've coloured.
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otakuking69 Featured By Owner 1 day ago
i fixed most of the mistakes on the eyes in photoshop
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Popokko Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
commenting on behalf of ProjectComment!

okay seeing your art honestly makes me really nostalgic because I remember also drawing like this when I was younger. It's almost like it's a step that everyone goes through to become a better artist xD Anyway! I thought at first this was an original character but it turns out to be from a show I haven't heard of. This piece is composed relatively the same as the others in your gallery, so it would be interesting to see some variation next time (or maybe a full body, but I know how hard those can be haha. Baby steps first)

As far as the anime styled is concerned you got it down pretty well - the eyes look great, and the shading on the scarf looks good :'3 Unfortunately a drawback to the anime style is that your nose looks funny, and so does her upper body (aka her breasts). A lot of beginner artists fall into this trap whenever they're trying to imitate this style, so don't feel bad about it :0 The best thing I can say is to look at references for her chest area, but don't just look at anime references -- look beyond to more realistic versions so that you don't fall in the trap of making breasts too round, etc. For the nose (I mess this up also), you can look to artworks that try to give dimension to it when the person is facing forward rather than just drawing it sideways :3

That's kind of it for now :v
tl;dr - experiment with more poses so she (and future works) won't look so stiff (but I understand if this is hard, it took me months to grow out of that, but it's ultimately for the better), check references on how to draw particular features such as nose and upper body

Final word of advice is to keep up the good work ^ v ^
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otakuking69 Featured By Owner 4 days ago
i am bad at drawing 3/4 view andime shich is why i dont do poses. i am working to improve that though. i used this for the nose refrense vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/a…

i am still learning how to draw breasts
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Popokko Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
practice is always good. I used to draw 3/4 a lot and had a hard time with face front stuff, but now I'm pretty okay with both haha. as for the picture, anime often does use some kind of tiny shadow for noses, which is why i suggested to look at other references for nose styles and stuff :0

and same my breasts suck lol
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Softwinter Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  New Deviant Student General Artist
You just did a great job, I really like how she looks and scarfs are awesome, it makes her look a bit more cooler
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LordChibiHalo Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
*fancy clap*
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Yersinia88 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice.
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